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.:CE:.Sora's Lantern Festival

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Very proud, worked hard. Took less that 2 days. c: I came up with hey! Sora really makes me think of Japan and such, so I did a lantern kinda japanese looking. c: Very proud hope you like it, and please critique!! o//u//o
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I haven't done one of these in a while, so why not~

Overall, these piece is beautiful, be proud of it for sure. The lighting gives off a nice glow and really sets a calm and cheerful mood. The backdrop is a nice contrast to the character and the lantern.


Buuuuut, I can see some things that could be improved. The lighting seems out of place with the shading, since the shading is completely un-blurred in any way and the lighting is pretty much all blurred. The bangs cover one eye at least, so I think the eye would be kind of obscured; I would suggest coloring the bangs on a layer over the eye color layer and lowering the opacity? It look more realistic. Light doesn't just light one subject, so maybe some lighting on the ground would help. Oh and some shadow on the ground where the light doesn't hit it. I would advise strengthening the lighting because the cat is right next to the lantern.

Other than that, I can't see any real flaws. Keep up the good work~

OH and I wish you luck in the contest!